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The presentation was very well received and thoroughly enjoyed by all of our members and guests who were in attendance.
Al is a dynamic speaker and kept the audience engages at all times. His every day examples of how to put his tips to use were effective - I know, I was using several the very next day.
Since May, quite a few members ranked Al's presentation as one of their favorites of the program year.
I would encourage any organization that uses e-mail to share this presentation with their members or employees. Al has the recommendation of the Pittsburgh Chapter of the American Society of Women Accountants."
Business Writing That
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article on the Palmer Method of
Is Your Business Writing Holding You Back?
Take this quick test. In your mind or on paper, rewrite the following sentences to make them clear, concise, complete, correct, and conversational.
"I am appreciative of all you hard work."
"With this situation, there is involved an apparent reorganization of all fifteen departments in the company."
"In a report to the company president, it was disclosed that profits were low and costs of sales were high."
"Our manager made a recommendation that we sell the returned goods for half price."
"It is therefore incumbent upon all employees to put forth their best efforts to overcome the minor problems that beset our company."
Check your results.
Does your approach come close to the clear, concise, powerful writing that saves time, gets better results and projects an image of a truly effective communicator?
Each example contains at least three common errors that produce lengthy, ineffective, time-wasting sentences. Did you identify all three in each sentence?
Click here and complete the form and you will receive a detailed explanation of the errors in each sentence. And, you will receive suggested ways you might have changed the sentences to make them shorter and more powerful.
Pittsburgh Business Times Article featuring Al Borowski
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Al Borowski, MEd, CSP, PP
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